Some very good work here Jamie. Meg and Chris- well done!
Just a few suggestions to improve your marks below...
Research:
- On your post on branding and music artists - you need to outline what their brand image actually is and how this is 'pushed' through their media texts/products.
Another example woudl be good here - Chris and Meg - it would be worth you looking at another artist here.
- Some of your images have disappeared - check through your posts and replace them.
Planning:
- Post on questionnaire results - graphs: You need a summing up paragraph on what you found and what were the most interesting results - also how you are going to apply what you found to your video so you can make it appeal to your target audience?
- An animatic of your storyboard would be good here - then a summing up of how you think the whole video works as a moving image sequence - will you need to add or change anything?
- Green screen training post - post what you actually did , what happened and what did you learn through this training task.
- Get all your call sheets and risk assessment forms on here too
- Also don't forget your weekly updates on your progress and production!
Miss McNulty
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